Friday 11 April 2014

Take-A-Break Club Ch1

Hello all,

This story came about from a part of my now-infamous 'Wall' story where a gorgeous girl lets another girl snap her neck. In the midst of a story that has earned rather more attention than I ever expected, that snipped has been the focus of even more attention.

And so I got interested in expanding on it - which turned into this.

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 "Uggghhh..." Kate groaned, shaking her head and pausing at her busy day to stretch.

"Heyyy babe, rough day?" Asked a lush-lipped brunette as she popped up over Kate's cube wall.

"Ahh! Boobs!" Kate blurted as she looked up from a complex spreadsheet and into Bobbi's bust.

"Yup, they are." Bobbi grinned impishly as she rested her lush bust atop the barrier.

"Heh, yeah, today's kinda got me on edge." Kate replied, sighing wearily as she gestured at her computer screen then clutched a sudden muscle twinge down her arm.

"Looks like it has! Tell you what, come join me and Dianne from accounting - we'll take you out and show you how to really take a load off. I insist." Bobbi said with finality as Kate started to protest.

"Ok, ok, I'll come..." Kate replied exasperatedly. "I could probably use a break after all."



"Exactly what I was thinking! See you at 5!" Bobbi grinned before bouncing off.

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"So, what do you call this place?" Kate asked as the cab pulled up in front of a busy-looking club.

"It's the 'Take a Break' club." Dianne replied - blonde locks shining and blue eyes bright as she stepped onto the curb and gazed hungrily at the club entrance.

"Ha! Has Kit Kat heard about this one?" Kate asked, smoothing her blue dress over her full breasts and down her lean form as she joined the busty blonde babe in staring at the dark double-doors.

"I don't think they're worried about this place..." Bobbi replied, wrapping her arms around the pair and guiding them through the door.

The foyer of the club was lined with red and, with the pulsing beats coming from beyond the doors into the club proper, felt like being inside a beating heart.

"B! D! Welcome back girls!" Called a smiling blonde working at the coat check. "Who's the friend? You here to help her take a break?" She asked with a twinkle in her eyes.

"Maybe, maybe." Bobbi replied, gliding up to the coat check and leaning in to give the toned blonde a quick peck. "How about you Casey-girl? Feel like finally taking a break tonight? You know you want to." She purred, reaching out to trail two fingers down the blonde's slim neck to tease at the valley of her ample cleavage as it rose out of her low-cut yellow top.

"Mmm... I like the way you think Bobbi. I'm off in 30, maybe I'll come find you." Casey replied, staring Bobbi in the eye and easing her bust forward into her fingers, only to have Bobbi's hand slip away. "Oh, tease." She murmured, nipples stiff.

"Enough flirting Dianne! I'm here to have some fun and we don't have a jacket to check between the three of us - let's get some drinks!" Bobbi said, grabbing Dianne by the arm and hauling her towards the interior double-doors that lead into the club.

"Too right! And, Kate, your drinks are on us tonight so don't hold back babe!" Dianne said with a grin.

"I don't know, I don't want to get too messed up..." Kate replied, looking into the club hesitantly.

"Oh come on girl, live a little!" Dianne laughed as she and Bobbi lunged for Kate.

"Ack!" Kate blurted playfully as she was grabbed by the arms and hauled through the doors.

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Passing through the doors Kate was hit in the face with a wave of lights, sound and the heat of a party packed with sweating, dancing, half-naked people.

Stepping through the door Kate bumped into a long-haired blonde and a close-cropped brunette who were making out fiercely, the blonde's hands around the brunette's neck. The pair cast lust-filled eyes at her as she muttered an apology and stumbled after her friends. Casting a glance back she saw the blonde give the brunette's slim neck a swift jerk. Kate paused, uncertain for a moment, as the brunette melted limply into the blonde.

As she was dragged through the crowd Kate was impressed by the daringly skimpy outfits of the nearly all-girl club crowd. Groping, kissing and near-fucking was rampant through the club dance floor, amidst the tables around it and even into the booths along the walls. Glancing into one booth Kate saw a few slumped figures amidst a group and felt oddly excited about how the unconscious beauties were still the subject of vigorous kissing and groping from the other girls in the booth. Realizing that one of the slumped figures was wearing a black StaffGirl shirt made her snort in amusement at the professionalism of the staff.

"Wow, crazy hot vibe here girls!" Kate shouted to be heard over the thumping music. Dianne's golden locks bounced along with her big boobs as she said something that was lost amidst the club noise.

"Easy girls, let's grab us some drinks to loosen up before we take us a break." Bobbi said, shoving Dianne and Kate into the bar and waving a busty black girl over.

"Hello beauties, what can I get you?" The tall, slim girl asked, smiling as all eyes were drawn to how her chest filled out her tight black top. "Other than the view." She teased.

"Oh wow you're hot!" Dianne giggled, boobs bouncing. "And wow you're such a gorgeous shade of black, rrowr! You match your top so close you could strip naked and nobody would notice you're missing the club logo!have the club logo spray-painted onto your tits without anybody noticing!"

"Ha-ha! I think these might give it away!" The ebon-skinned babe replied, laughing as she pulled her shirt up to bare her firm breasts and the metal bars piercing each of her erect nipples.

"Whoa!" Kate blurted, not expecting the sudden boobage.

"Now," the black girl continued as she pulled her shirt back down, "can I get you a drink? Or maybe you'd like me to let you know about a few of the options for taking a break around here?"

"Oh that would be great, today was brutal and I could really use a break." Kate replied, an exasperated tone to her voice as she spoke about work.

"Um, let's start our new friend with a drink first." Bobbi interrupted as the black girl opened her mouth to reply. "All on me." She added, handing over her credit card.

"Sure thing girls, let me take your orders." The toned black girl replied with a knowing grin.

A minute later Kate had a drink in her and another in her hand. "Ohhh... This is more like the break I needed." She breathed, a look of relief on her face as she leaned against the bar watched the club crowd writhe like a sea of appealing flesh and smiled at a pair of girls as they sauntered past, drinks in hand.

"Need a break do you?" Asked a trim girl with raven hair, leather pants and her arm around a hot blonde in a tight red sports top.

"That's what I'm here for." Kate replied, saluting the hot pair with her glass and admiring their curves.

"That's the spirit girl!" Bobbi laughed, her and Dianne ogling the pair and their full breasts along with Kate.

"My friend Lexi and I are up for a break." The raven-haired girl purred, stepping close to Kate and eyeballing her nice big breasts.

"Oh yeah, especially with a babe like you..." The blonde Lexi slurred, alcohol on her breath as she ogled Kate.

"Why thank you, you're a luscious one yourself you know." Kate replied, smiling as she tucked a finger into the blonde's top and tugged the girl close enough to plant a peck on her lips.

"Mmm, lively." The blonde babe murmured, lurching into Kate's arms and locking lips hungrily.

Kate balked for a second, then melted into the hot blonde's lips.

"Done and done babe, save a little for me." The raven-haired girl said, stepping in.

Kate moaned at the unexpected threesome, eyes bulging as the raven-haired babe thrust her tongue down her throat but wrapping her arms around the pair and entwining her tongue with the girl hungrily.

"You go girl!" Kate heard Dianne laugh. Glancing past the blonde babe she winked at her busty friend then gasped as she felt hands on her breasts - squeezing the firm globes and scooping them from her tight top.

Kate moaned in pleasure as the blonde ducked down to nuzzle and nip at her boobs while the raven-haired babe guided her hands up her tight white shirt to the stiff-nippled mounds of her own breasts. Giggling, Kate fondled back and cooed in delight as she found the girl's piercings and tugged them.

"Ohhh... This is just the kind of break I needed." Kate breathed as the raven-haired babe stroked her long, slender neck. Moaning as the raven-haired babe wrapped her hands around her neck, Kate let herself be pulled in for a moist kiss.

Suddenly Kate realized that Bobbi had stepped up behind the raven-haired babe and wrapped her hands around her neck. "Ummm... Hey Bobbi - want in on this?" Kate asked.

"I think I do," Bobbi replied, "how about you babe - how does this feel?" She asked the raven-haired beauty.

"Mmm... Oh that's nice..." The girl replied, closing her eyes and rolling her neck as Bobbi gripped it firmly.

"You ready to take a break?" Bobbi asked.

"Totally ready." The raven-haired girl replied, nipples achingly stiff in Kate's hands.

There was a lusty moan as, with a smooth motion, Bobbi rolled the raven-haired girl's head to one side.

"Do it..." The raven-haired girl breathed.

Bobbi smiled then snapped the girl's head back the other way.

Kate's eyes bulged as she heard a *snap!* and the gorgeous girl slumped into Bobbi.

Stunned, Kate watched Bobbi calmly catch the limp girl and ease her down onto a booth seat.

"Vi?" The blonde slurred, rising up from Kate's lush bust and blinking at her slumped friend.

"Oh god... Bobbi? Oh go-" Kate began to stammer.

"Vi!" The blonde blurted eyes wide.

"Oh my god, I am so sor-"

"Hot damn babe! So good!" The blonde continued with burbling enthusiasm. "Not without me though girl! C'mon - someone give me a break!" The blonde urged, stretching her neck out and stroking both hands down it.

Kate stared, bewildered, as Dianne wrapped her hands around the blonde's neck and took a firm grip.

"Oh yeah, mmm... do it." The blonde moaned, one hand hauling her top up to let her boobs spill out while her other slid into her tight pants to stroke herself.

"Watch this Kate, this is how to take a break." Dianne chirped brightly. Then she rolled the moaning blonde's to one side and whipped it back with a crisp *snap!* sound.

Kate gulped as the blonde went limp in Dianne's grip and was gently lowered to the booth seat where she was stacked on top of her busty friend.

"Whoa..." Kate breathed, eyes wide and mind reeling as the club sunk in.

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This is, for the record, just the first chapter. I realized I could pause the story there and release this rather than leaving the whole thing in my WIP folder until I wrote another dozen pages.

So, let me know what you think about it and where you think it should go next. I am particularly interested in ideas for other club attendees that these three should encounter - fire me your fetish ideas and I'll see what I make of them!

Cheers,
Bill

3 comments:

  1. This was pretty perfect for me .Consensual Manual neck breaking, clean slice debreasting, garrote, manual strangulation, throat slicing, decapitation are my favorite methods. I dislike torture, so when you do drawn out kills (acid, breast destruction, crushing, shooting etc)I'm grateful that it involves great pleasure for the "victim" , Since my methods are so fast, I need large body counts or really intimate intense scenes to feel sated.

    Thank you for the stories, I really, really appreciate them.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it!

      I've been toying around with stories that feature larger body counts - I like the idea but executing it in a way that works... There's a different style of writing for that and you have to be aware of your audience.

      At any rate, care to shoot me your ideas for characters moving forward? Give me a name and 2-3 notes about body, personality and motivation and I'll see if I can work one or two into the story!

      Eg: Mallory - Short punk, mohawk & piercings. Her ex works at the club and dumped her because Mallory was scared of the club. Mallory wants to show her ex that she's not scared anymore so she wants someone to do her.

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